After a very hard time of decisions the results are up~
For every entry there will be a total score out of 40 since there were 4 judges not including myself. Each entry will also receive two or three comments from the judges which will be anonymous and will be presented in the form of:
The judges order is not the same for each one of the entries this means that for an entry it might be
judge 1, judge 2, judge 3 and the other one judge 4, judge 1, judge 3 and so one but it will always appear in the format above.
Also, there is an extra grading out of 10 from me. Only the top 4 entries will receive my commentary =3=
Also the entries are organised by grading meaning the lowest to the highest
Some entries that weren't in the top 4 but I considered that they need to be mentioned will appear under the name of honourable mention and the reason why I chose them as so. This will also include a little prize.
WITHOUT FURTHER DELAY THE RESULTS:
Have to take away some points due to the fact that a base was used for one of the panels. You have great potential, you just need to keep practicing. Also, check the grammar and spelling next time
El dibujo del segundo panel se me hizo demasiado parecido a este: sam-ely-ember.deviantart.com/a…
me puse a comparar el lineart con Sai y coincide demasiado.
Judge 3: I'll be honest, the grammar could have use a little effort in both the entries but Vincent's expression was decent enough.
Judge 1: I love the idea as a whole, but it doesn't really feel finished (as in you could still do a lot more to it). I really like it, but I just don't feel it's at the same presentational level as the other entries.
Judge 2: For being a traditional drawing Para ser un dibujo tradicional estuvo muy bien hecho. el tipo de dibujo me encanto pero la sombra del piso se pudo haber mejorado, aunque no entiendo bien que quiere ser lo de azul pero bueh~ La carita de Victoria, ese es el encanto del dibujo. Un dibujo tradicional y uno digital tienen sus diferencias -u-
Personal Comment: I'm giving this entry an honourable mention because it's the only traditional drawing entry that was submitted
Judge1: It's an adorable design and idea, but it could use touching up. Maybe shading a little? Also, it's completely fine if you feel like you can't draw realistic-like eyes. For the style used, I suggest sticking to cartoon eyes.
Judge 2: You have a very clean lineart and soft colours, they are beautiful. The only thing missing is the backgorund because it looks a little empty. A background a pastel colour would have been nice, but the drawing was very adorable.
Judge 1: It has a great concept in general, but it could use touching up.
Judge 2: I have to admit, the concept was very interesting. The lineart was perfect with the concept although you have to improve the light effect but it was ok
Judge 1: I think you could improve the panelling, since you probably moved the images around to make them fit, which made some of the panels look squashed.
Judge 2: The comic was nice, the ideas great and the expresiones are beautiful. The kissing panel is my favourite. Critique? Well you know. The postures could use a little work.
Judge 1: It's really great! I can only suggest working on the facial expressions of the characters and maybe on the hands as well.
Judge 2: The type of colouring, the background (which is perfect), the expressions… Victoria's face…. beautiful~ The line art was good too
Judge 1: The paneling is a bit confusing, great idea though! It's very lovely.
Judge 2: A very nice story. Good backgrounds, good colouring but the postures needed to be worked on, they look to tense. I liked it. The star background made me go mad, it's my weakness.
Judge 3: The drawing were nice. The comic was a little disorganised and the idea a little… dull.
Judge1: It's very pretty, but I feel like the character's arms are at some strange angles/look a bit funny. And Victoria's waist seems to be a bit strange... (Try defining the curves?)
Judge 2: This drawing is nice, the background isn't the center of attention it's nice but I do feel like pink is not a great colour for this couple. A job well done. The postures do need to be worked on they seem to tense and a little funny. I liked the little details like the eye colouring, the blush and the lips. Nice.
Judge 1: As a whole, this picture is definitely great. Maybe try making the pictures sharper in general(?)
Judge 2: The postures were good and they don't look fake, it's beautiful. I love it, although you have to improve your colouring.
Personal Comment: I was present when this was drawn and in all honestly if it was up to me I would have put it at least top 4. I loved the concept and the idea of the world and Vincent trapping her.
Judge 1: Aw! It's the cutest thing ever! I really love the style chosen. I think you did a great job. The only thing I would say is to try and make Vincent's ears a bit rounder (but maybe that's just me)
Judge 2: What I loved about this entry is the colouring speacially the eyes and hair ( My secret weakness). A A job very well done. the only thing missing were some little details about the line art and the background's perspective seems a little off and some wrinkles on Victoria's dress. It's a very adorable entry.
Judge 1: Also reached the 'perviness' requirement. I suggest working on anatomy and making the image sharper.
Judge 2: Look what I found… Oh well. The shadows and the colour don't really match with the night background but the drawing is very good, I can't deny that. The postures are perfect, you only meed to correct the background so it matches the drawing. The idea is very original, I must admit.
Personal Comment: I needed to comment of this one and in all honesty one of my personal favourites. I loved he concept and this was the most original idea presented.
Judge 1: It's beautiful! The only thing I would suggest is working on the facial expressions of the characters. Other than that, great job!
Judge 2: The drawings are much more beautiful when the watermark isn't so obvious but oh well. The hair colouring technique used is beautiful not to mention the concept! The line art is very good but the postures are a little funny. Overall it was a very good entry.
It's so cute!
I love the whole chibi-like style. Victoria's dress isn't the same, but I can understand why
it's too complicated refi!
Judge 2: The colouring and the concept, perfect. The only detail that I think you should work on is in the pink, it should be more eye-catching due to at first sight it doesn't look good.
Judge 3: Certainly the drawing is very adorable, I just think that the proportions are a little weird. Apart from that little detail it was adorable specially Vincent who looks very sexy.
Comments: My favourite part of this drawing is Vincent's hair. I just loved it. I also liked the shading and how she drew the hair. Overall it's a very nice drawing but the proportion seem off and Victoria's dress seems a little funny. I know it's not an easy dress to draw but there was the other option which was her mad hatter cloth designs. I also loved the expressions; Victoria seems not amused and Vincent has that I don't care look. Also there is the flower a rose, Victoria's favourite. The drawing made me laugh because this is actually a scene in the story and that's exactly how she reacted. (Chapter 3 is not released yet so it amused me)
Judge 1: It's so adorable!! And the anatomy is great. I just find them acting a bit ooc, but that's okay. Lovely work!
Judge 2: The type of drawing was extremely good, I have nothing else to say.
Judge 3: Victoria's character seems a little ooc but overall the comic was very well made. I also notice that she added the kind of backgrounds Regina would use.
Comments: I deducted some points because as the other judges I have to agree that Victoria does seem a little occ but she actually is like that, I just don't think she would act that way in front of Vincent. I am very fond of this comic since the little details Helena added are amazing like the background or the fact that Vincent had a chocolate addiction. I really can't deny that this entry deserves to win. I really appreciate the fact that she took the time to read the character introductions I made and use it to her advantage.
Definitely reached the 'perviness' requirement
Try making the story a bit clearer, since it's a mini-comic.
Judge 2: Can I give it 100? This comic was great. It was funny and pervert at the same time. Just like I like it. The kiss, the colours, the background, the expressions… everything was perfect. It was an excellent job, this will have a spot or I'll hit you (This is for Regina)
Judge 3: From my point of view I loved the drawing style! Is very colourful and eye catching, besides is very original not to mention it has a perverted ending. The story is consistent, proportions are accurate and I loved the fact that there was no dialogue. Somehow it seems that words aren't necessary. I loved it… Horray Hentai! Yuhuuu!
Comments: I honestly don't have too much experience drawing cartoon but I know enough to know that I can't draw like that. I like how my characters look in that style. It had the pervert requirement and the fact that it doesn't really need dialogue makes it fun. I was inventing little stories while I went through it. I also like the fact that this entry was one of the only two entries that used Victoria's mad hatter cloths. It's a very original entry and I really enjoyed it.
Judge 1: Wow. It's amazing, and I really love it. You really nailed the designs, and it looks wonderful.
Judge 2: Definitely worth a 10. Good shading, colouring, postures, cloths's wrinkles, background, expresions… Oh cursed perfect expressions!
Judge 3: In my personal opinion this entry kilos me, their poses are so intense is very original. You drew their cloths how they are supposed be, their expressions seem real specially Victoria's. It seemed like she is having an inside debate "Common Victoria, resist, resist, resist… Fuck" or something like that. The only reason I don't give it a 10 is because there are other entries that have that perverseness of Vincent.
Comments: Ok, first I need to explain why I didn't give you the perfect 10; because I believe that there can always be something to be improved. This is my personal favourite for various reasons, one of them being that you drew Victoria's dress perfectly, you also outlined the curves she has. Unlike many entries Vincent's hair is drawn how it's supposed to be. I also loved the fact that you got my characters personalities and their grim expressions go according to the story.
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